Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Exposition exposed

Here's page 2 of chapter two with the text all blurred. Astute viewers will still get the drift. I don't want to spoil the whole story before publication, so trying to hold back. This page is a big info dump, which came to be two ways: I wanted to change direction a bit, and I hate when mysteries that are posed at the end of an "episode" are not dealt with in the following episode. So I am happy to dump what was meant to be a whole chapter into one page.

Hopefully I can have Lionheart out of the kitchen in a few panels and get these characters a little action. Things are still Barton Finky in that department.

So, I had a plan - and changed it midstream. Not a news flash here.

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